1. Why is lord of Barrowton lord Locke? There should be lady Dustin.
2. I think it would be great if to The North will be added house Ryswell and their seat The Rills, house Glenmore and their seat Rillwater Crossing, house Forester and house Whitehill and their seats. And maybe some of three houses from Skagos.
3. The quest for lord Bolton and lord Frey - Red wedding. With possibilty stay faithful to kiing Robb and help him destroy this traitors houses and then if you are lord of The North king Robb will award you the Dreadfort.
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